Monday, 4 November 2019
Hot Air Balloon Survival
Last week we did a slide about a hot air balloon survival. On the island we have yeast, sugar, and hot water from a rock pool that was heated by the sun. PS this slide isn't sufficiently correct. I didn't use a hot air balloon I used a raft to escape from the island. I liked writing the creative writing. I found hard thinking of what to write. The meaning behind this task was to do a new experiment.here is my work.
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Kia ora Buster,
ReplyDeleteIt is Lawrence, I really liked your creative story, you used a lot good verbs, adjectives and punctuation. I liked the way that you used the balloon as a mask for going under water in your story.