This week, we have been reading articles and they all had tasks. One of those, was a article about a octopus called Heidi. First, we had to compare her to one of our pets. Next, we had to write about if we had a octopus. I liked writing about the octopus because, we were free to write about what we did with the octopus and how we found it. I found it hard writing in my book, because I'm used to my Chromebook The meaning behind this task was to let us do some creative writing. Here's my work and the compare your animal thing.
Kia ora Buster. My name is Vanya and I am a year 8 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I have been going through your amazing work that you have been doing this term. I have been reading your writing about the octopus. You have done a great job putting lots of information in you writing about the octopus. It's cool that you tried to teach him how to drive a car and feed your pets. Is octopus your favourite sea animal. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHello Buster. I am Brisa, a year five student at Paihia School. your story about the octopus was amazing. I also like the part that you put your finger down Bob's head and licked your finger, it was funny😂. Maybe next time you write a story it could be a bit longer so I can have more information. I like your story. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Buster, my name is Fern and I am a Year 5 student at Paihia School. I like that Octopus story of yours it's creative it's really cool to read as well. That part when you put your finger in Bob's head it was really funny!!!!! 😂😆😄 Maybe you could do it about something else in your life make something really funny? Keep up the good work. 😁
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